Points made in video:
- After putting the clips of the characters in the seminar room in we felt that the ending of our film didn't work with the start.
- Visually the start was very strong and brilliant lighting and a variety camera angles, however the seminar room was dull and drained the colour from the actresses.
- We are going to re film the ending outside.
- We will follow on from where the character Jenny is outside with anxiety and then make Sophie walk past and Jessica then walk past Sophie so the sequence flows.
- We must make sure that when re filming the whether is similar to the day we filmed Jenny outside.
- We also felt that the music we have chosen to use for our piece is too sinister, and almost feels like it should be in a horror film so we need to reconsider and look on more websites.
I drew out a storyboard for the shots we want to film outside:
The last few shots where Jessica and Sophie are smiling at each other are essential to portray the friendship they have found in each other.
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